50,000 Year Old Home

[Atheist Saint]

Oh, greatful hearth!
The birth of life to be!
The center of all emotion
Untouched with it's elegant beauty

Sometimes within the walls
Innovations shall abound in minds
Some come forth to be Gods
While others are beaten by time

Schisms arise within the confines
Sending innocents away in casts
The eldest siblings take no blame
Washing away mistakes in the bath

When struck with responsiblilty
and you want your life remaining with candor
Put a bullet into your pride
And stick your brain in the freezer

When your 78 year lease is up
And you can take no more action
Pay your lease and walk out the door
Your life and contributions, forgotten

[alex]

wait... i need a little time to consume it... i like it, it's raw, but passionate.

[Lisa Vicious]

hmmm not sure what to make of it. It's different. Raw is a good choice of words.

[xdrtlx]

passion..can be good