Monster Within and Modern Day Civil War

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sooo i figured i'd post some of my stuff. poems/lyrics with no music yet/whatever you wanna call em. here ya go.

The Monster Within

A nightmare
A monster
Hidden in my past

Look into the mirror
The monster stares right back
Looking through its eyes
I'm never coming back

A life
A death
Things I never had

A dream
A hope
Covered by the black

Look into the mirror
The monster stares right back
Looking into my eyes
See my soul of black

A transformation of what I once was
The nightmare is here
The monster is real
And here I stand, no more a man

A shell
A hell
That lives inside

I crawl
I fall
And forever hide

Look into the mirror
The monster stares right back
Looking through the shards
Of my broken life


Modern Day Civil War

cold hearts, black skies
and no one seems to care
stiff necks, blank eyes
as we sit and stare
at our tv screens
watching the world unfurl
into something
we've never seen before

what should we do
as our nation crumbles
we're not ready
for another battle
control is taken
by the opposing force
this strong power
will be the end of all

we are enemy
destroying each other
we are ally
looking out for brothers

coexisting good and evil
fighting ourselves for the rule
modern day civil war
just to find the bigger fool

cold steel, black gun
and i'm off to the fields
stiff corpse, blank stares
are the bodies of the slain
walking into war
i take my precautions
to kill or be killed
are my only options

what should i do
as my army fumbles
we're not ready
for any battles
control is taken
by those bastards
raising my rifle
will be the end of me

we are enemy
destroying each other
no more ally
killing our brothers

existing evil in the world
fought ourselves for this hell
modern day civil war
just one shot will end it all

[Atheist Saint]

I can defenitely see those as being awesome songs if applied to music (especially the first one)