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Post by Lisa Vicious on May 16, 2006 18:12:24 GMT -5
Penetration.
The void I am is the hole I used to be,
whole I never was.
I've tasted sin and procreated a soul
that's life was not mine to be in....
they say and who are they anyway,
that I should forget for it wasn't meant to be,
what I think they meant was they are tired of listening to me -
cry, rant, rave, yell, and self-destruct,
You stole my heart for just one fuck.
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Atheist Saint
Crazed Fan
Poetic Terrorist
Blending the 21'st centrury with hate
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Post by Atheist Saint on May 16, 2006 18:19:21 GMT -5
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amyleeotepfan19
Curiousity Killer
Love is the slowest form of suicide...
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Post by amyleeotepfan19 on May 16, 2006 20:33:38 GMT -5
This is great! There is no run around with the words to draw it out. It is full of emotion and right to the point. It takes talent to convey so much emotion with such a short amount of words.
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Post by Lisa Vicious on May 16, 2006 21:06:38 GMT -5
Thanks so much!! Yeah I had a lot of emotions going through me about this one.
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